Wednesday, April 18, 2012

honeybee





Hum the sound
of bliss- be my bee,
moment bared

moment bared
lives give birth -honey,
you breathe me





april challenge
prompt: honeybee

11 comments:

  1. Very beautiful and ....don't know..is it sensual too..I found it very interesting..to think on it...I mean what picture does it create.. RS:)

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    1. the Canvas remains white ....RS. I feel these line s are more realistic than sensual. but if it sensual .. id love it .. the line s have served their purpose.

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    2. May be the cascade .. is creating a veil :) of being sensual, of hiding the trauma of separation from the beloved

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  2. This is lovely, sensual and romantic. I like it a lot :-)

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  3. I like your different take on the prompt. Very passionate.

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    1. :) the purpose of written words is served well .. when they can add meaning in to solitude..and make silence speak.. thnks

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    2. Ya, that's why I couldn't describe perfectly what I felt, but can say felt ..:)

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    3. in the first word replace H with A, honey = nectar, bee= the master, moment bared= silence, you breath me... is surrendering....... your own breath

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