Wednesday, April 04, 2012

Waves

Relentless
are the waves -  seldom
  corals sigh







written for haiku heights
April Challenge
prompt: Waves

28 comments:

  1. What a beautiful take on waves.. very thoughtful ..one can so clearly see... thanks..

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  2. these lines have shown me a canvas painted with an rich underwater life, corals and fish, waves, yes.

    great one.
    thank you..

    regards,
    jayanth.

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    1. jayant....!! thanks its a compliment

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  3. but only waves keep the water fresh ... otherwise it would stink and stay ... and harm creatures :/

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    1. wave...ocean...stream...flow...

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  4. wow! That was deep... no, not the corals... ur words!
    Beautiful..!

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    1. corals....disagree with me most of the time

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  5. nice form alluding to nature and contrasting images ~ perfect ~

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    1. thanks grace for noting the contrast...really appreciate it

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  6. Very colorful and creative haiku ~thanks, namaste, ^_^

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    1. Dear AMD and C .....namaste. thanks

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  7. Picturesque and amazing haiku! you made a nice picture with words!!! Thanks!

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    1. DT.. no picture actually .. may be its the state of mind i am talking about...

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  8. Awesome! This one came really deep into my heart. Lovely composed haiku.

    Namaste

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    1. Namaste. C
      Thanks to your heart for allowing words to enter its pristine chambers....

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  9. Simple and deep haiku....Beautifully written :)

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  10. They give life to each other! Great haiku!

    Hank

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  11. Hi Kaykula... yes they do .. probably thats the reason why corals dont sigh

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  12. Enjoyed this very much, debu ... thank you for sharing ... and I appreciate your visit to my Day 5 ~~ Waves Wash Over Me.

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    1. thanks becca..sorry didnt reply to you earlier

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  13. I like the simplicity in this. Nice.

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    1. Thanks Patti... i like the honesty in your comments.. as always..

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