Monday, April 01, 2013

Ascent




last night 
the sea was rough
waves heaved




written for Haiku heights 
Prompt: Ascent





8 comments:

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    1. Stomachs!! woww thought it was in the mind ....

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  2. Yet the rocks laughed...wow....I loved it ...picked up this line here from a Haiku I wrote a couple of years ago... You made my day with this one..

    RS

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    1. yup RS .. haven't read your haiku though..in this haiku I mean every thing that is happening in an adulterous mind....:)

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    1. thanks simran...you are welcome

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  4. Beautiful metaphor. And I am laughing a the comment above.

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